Work harder
Graphics: Okay looking not too bad. The drawing is something that would look like in between passing and getting blammed. So you need to work on the drawings.
3/10
Style: The drawing style of your character is unoriginal. Think of you own ideas. Plus there is no real good plot.
4/10
Sound: Eh sound could be better. Have some better music.
4/10
Violence: Nothing I can't handle.
2/10
Interactivity: I was quite bored with this storyline.
2/10
Humor: Nothing
0/10
Overall: Needs some work. You got potential.
3/10
-AnzRage